Revisions

I received my peer review late last night so I did not use it to change anything in my paper. I read over my paper several times though and I am fine with the first draft I submitted. After reading over my peer's comments this morning, I see that I may need to reorganize the layout of my paper. I agree with her suggestions and I am going to leave the content but play around with paragraph organization. The strongest element of my paper I think is my perspective from the Japanese Government and my perspective from the Scientists. I was able to find the most information on both of those perspectives therefore I think their opinions come across very clear. I am concerned about letting my bias on whaling show through my writing, but my peer gave me a helpful suggestion to fix that. By mixing up my anti-whaling and pro-whaling paragraphs it will make my paper seem more balanced rather than biased.